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Post by mysterypast on Jul 12, 2006 16:28:10 GMT -5
here is my character: name:amanda species:hyrulian gender:Female Age:10 Description:light blue hair dark blue jeans and a blue shirt backround:she is a girl who has spent a wonderful life.as a hyrulian,she is ready for battle.Although she never has fought.she has read every book about termina and hyrule. weapons:a water baloon throwing machine and a pencil gun magic:fire and ice arrows Item:Bomb Bossform:skullkid(without majoras mask) Respawn points:at bench in clock town laundry pool and at the beggining of deku palace Strengths;fire,psychic Weaknesses:Thunder,grass Themesong;Simple And Clean(Techno Remix) ok,i'm done
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Post by Mammôth on Jul 12, 2006 21:46:14 GMT -5
I'm not the one accepting, but I don't understand your weapons or weaknesses. Water balloons and a pencil gun? Really? And how does Thunder (a sound) affect your character? Did you mean lightning? And what does grass do to you?
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Post by mysterypast on Jul 13, 2006 12:01:39 GMT -5
well,grass can suck up her powers andyou are right lightning was it.Ijust couldn't think of attacks so I wanted to use natural resources.
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Post by Mammôth on Jul 13, 2006 21:29:10 GMT -5
OK i wasn't sure if you meant element-type attacks like from Pokemon or the actual things.
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Post by mysterypast on Jul 14, 2006 18:46:50 GMT -5
ok,cool!
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Post by MajikNiNE on Jul 16, 2006 14:47:02 GMT -5
Hon...you post your character sheet here for APPROVAL. Meaning you need to wait for ME to okay you for roleplaying. Your RP posts, I'm afraid I'm going to have to delete them.
Now...I'll go over your sheet with you.
Firstly, this is a literate roleplay, meaning you need to capitalize at the start of sentences, space between words, and spellcheck. It doesn't need to be perfect, but it DOES need to show a considerable effort on your part. Fool me into thinking your trying to keep up the quality of your posts.
Also...you need more detail in your description. I feel what you've given me is a little too rudimentary. The same with your background. Give me more, make it detailed. Your weapons...are unusual, and I'm not sure how you would be able to make them work. The pencil gun I'm afraid I'll have to reject, but the water balloon throwing machine...if you can explain how she came to get that in her background, then I'll give the okay for it.
And you say grass sucks up her powers? ....But why? For what reason? Another point you should probably try explaining in your background. And I would think lightning would hurt anyone...try coming up with something else. Also, why is she psychic? Why is she able to read other's minds? That ability, I'm afraid I can't allow, only because it holds too much possibility for unfair gameplay.
And your character's so young...care to explain who her parents are and why she is such a skilled fighter?
Work on what I've told you and re-post your char sheet. If it works, then I'll okay you.
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Post by mara1129 on Jul 11, 2008 23:51:46 GMT -5
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